minilogoguy18 Posted June 29, 2014 Share Posted June 29, 2014 That head needs to be scrapped, the mouth is really messed up, the jawline is wrong and the ears are too far forward and not part of the same mesh. Sithani likes this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted June 29, 2014 Author Share Posted June 29, 2014 Top lip looks too fat, do tell though... Why would those 3 small adjustments mean scrapping a head? Dont let your personal profectionism hinder the production of the Hub. I have really yet to see you leave a positive comment ever lol. So your advice will be taken with a grain of salt. Good eye on those trouble areas though. ZanderNao likes this Link to comment
therfiles Posted June 29, 2014 Share Posted June 29, 2014 Really loving those outfits, Chalk! They really look good! ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
GPChannel Posted June 29, 2014 Share Posted June 29, 2014 Amazing jobs Bro! ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
Lamented Posted June 29, 2014 Share Posted June 29, 2014 I don't think I will ever understand how Starkiller is so hard to model. O.i GPChannel likes this Link to comment
ZanderNao Posted June 29, 2014 Share Posted June 29, 2014 I don't think I will ever understand how Starkiller is so hard to model. O.i He's based on a human with incredibly unusual proportions. Brow, nose, chin, head, ears - none of it lines up like most people. Just too unique for his own good, lol. therfiles, ChalklYne, GPChannel and 1 other like this Link to comment
negru_tudor Posted June 29, 2014 Share Posted June 29, 2014 I don't think I will ever understand how Starkiller is so hard to model. O.iI'm pretty sure you'd understand if you'd have a go at it...trust me..been there, failed miserably. major props for these guys over here ChalklYne and therfiles like this Link to comment
minilogoguy18 Posted June 29, 2014 Share Posted June 29, 2014 Sorry, just being real, the shape is very off, doesn't really seem fixable, curious to see a wireframe overlay. Sithani and ChalklYne like this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted June 30, 2014 Author Share Posted June 30, 2014 Will do asap. I tried to sketchfab it, but couldnt figure it out on this phone. I still have so much to do elsewhere that I really wouldnt mind starting it over if it was really necessary. I like the practice, it seems like each time I start over, I have to adjust and sculpt less. Ill try the sketchfab again or just post a wireframe soon. Link to comment
Jolly Posted July 6, 2014 Share Posted July 6, 2014 still a lot to be done but heres one of the characters i been working on. I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest. This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer. Link to comment
Boothand Posted July 6, 2014 Share Posted July 6, 2014 I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest. This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer. Scroll.. to the top of the last page Bek likes this Link to comment
Futuza Posted July 7, 2014 Share Posted July 7, 2014 I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest. This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer.Part of this project is making a massive army of ugly people for me to have fun with. Omicron, negru_tudor and ChalklYne like this Link to comment
Omicron Posted July 7, 2014 Share Posted July 7, 2014 Part of this project is making a massive army of ugly people for me to have fun with.JKG could do with some civilians, not everyone has to be good looking in it Futuza likes this Link to comment
Circa Posted July 7, 2014 Share Posted July 7, 2014 I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest. This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer.You're referring his very first version. 39 pages later, he gets much better. But seriously, why would anyone want to hear that statement anyway? I'm all for opinions but that statement wasn't helpful at all. it wasn't even a critique. ZanderNao and therfiles like this Link to comment
Jolly Posted July 7, 2014 Share Posted July 7, 2014 You're referring his very first version. 39 pages later, he gets much better. But seriously, why would anyone want to hear that statement anyway? I'm all for opinions but that statement wasn't helpful at all. it wasn't even a critique.Yea, I just saw his later work, definitely get better. My point in that post being it looked terrible and needed much improvement, and improve he did. Circa likes this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted July 8, 2014 Author Share Posted July 8, 2014 I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest. This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer.Noted. And no worries, if I did not want bad critique, I wouldnt even read this thread lol Barricade24 likes this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted July 12, 2014 Author Share Posted July 12, 2014 GPChannel, DarthStiv, Bek and 2 others like this Link to comment
DarthStiv Posted July 12, 2014 Share Posted July 12, 2014 Er, you should fix the link a bit, but the head looks absolutely superb with the textures now,it's a true starkiller finally!You man did a great progress on it since the beginning, I simply have no words. ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted July 12, 2014 Author Share Posted July 12, 2014 getting closer, ill admit that. going to work on his neck and hair a bit more@@Circa can you fix that link for me?heres the sculpt so far... rough draft GPChannel, Bek and McGroose like this Link to comment
Scorpion Posted July 12, 2014 Share Posted July 12, 2014 His eyebrows are...funky and thick. Nice work none the less! Link to comment
therfiles Posted July 12, 2014 Share Posted July 12, 2014 Fixed those links. Looking great! Definitly a step in the right direction! ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
Futuza Posted July 15, 2014 Share Posted July 15, 2014 Is it just me or does this one look like Adam Sandler? Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted July 15, 2014 Author Share Posted July 15, 2014 I think thats u brotha... although, I did make a SK one day that looked exactly like james franco oO wish I would have saved it... DT. likes this Link to comment
Lamented Posted July 17, 2014 Share Posted July 17, 2014 Wow. Love the texturing, man. The face is a little too narrow. Too pushed in from the sides. And I don't know if it's just me who feels this way, but I don't think his nose curves like that. Should be somewhat tougher. The lips are getting there and the forehead should be mostly right. Be wary of his eye sockets, also. They might be a little smaller but I don't know. Maybe not. You're getting there, Chalk. Closer and closer. ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
Milamber Posted July 18, 2014 Share Posted July 18, 2014 he looks kinda malnourished. And kinda more like anakin than starkiller. At least in the last picture Only my own opinion ofc.Ears are still bothering me though, they look like discs attached to the head. ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
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