starkiller

[minilogoguy18]

That head needs to be scrapped, the mouth is really messed up, the jawline is wrong and the ears are too far forward and not part of the same mesh.

[ChalklYne]

Top lip looks too fat, do tell though... Why would those 3 small adjustments mean scrapping a head? Dont let your personal profectionism hinder the production of the Hub. I have really yet to see you leave a positive comment ever lol. So your advice will be taken with a grain of salt. Good eye on those trouble areas though.

[therfiles]

Really loving those outfits, Chalk! They really look good!

[GPChannel]

Amazing jobs Bro! 

[Lamented]

I don't think I will ever understand how Starkiller is so hard to model. O.i

[ZanderNao]

I don't think I will ever understand how Starkiller is so hard to model. O.i

 

He's based on a human with incredibly unusual proportions. Brow, nose, chin, head, ears - none of it lines up like most people. Just too unique for his own good, lol.

[negru_tudor]

I don't think I will ever understand how Starkiller is so hard to model. O.i

I'm pretty sure you'd understand if you'd have a go at it...trust me..been there, failed miserably. major props for these guys over here

[minilogoguy18]

Sorry, just being real, the shape is very off, doesn't really seem fixable, curious to see a wireframe overlay.

[ChalklYne]

Will do asap. I tried to sketchfab it, but couldnt figure it out on this phone. I still have so much to do elsewhere that I really wouldnt mind starting it over if it was really necessary. I like the practice, it seems like each time I start over, I have to adjust and sculpt less. Ill try the sketchfab again or just post a wireframe soon.

[Jolly]

still a lot to be done but heres one of the characters i been working on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest.

 

This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer.

[Boothand]

I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest.

 

This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer.

 

Scroll.. to the top of the last page

[Futuza]

I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest.

 

This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer.

Part of this project is making a massive army of ugly people for me to have fun with.

[Omicron]

Part of this project is making a massive army of ugly people for me to have fun with.

JKG could do with some civilians, not everyone has to be good looking in it

[Circa]

I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest.

 

This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer.

You're referring his very first version. 39 pages later, he gets much better.

 

But seriously, why would anyone want to hear that statement anyway? I'm all for opinions but that statement wasn't helpful at all. it wasn't even a critique.

[Jolly]

You're referring his very first version. 39 pages later, he gets much better.

 

But seriously, why would anyone want to hear that statement anyway? I'm all for opinions but that statement wasn't helpful at all. it wasn't even a critique.

Yea, I just saw his later work, definitely get better. My point in that post being it looked terrible and needed much improvement, and improve he did. 

[ChalklYne]

I hate to be mean, so if you do not want bad critique please do not read the rest.

 

This model is god awful, looks like a model out of Dark Forces 2, it looks like a monkey with a deformity more than sam witwer.

Noted. And no worries, if I did not want bad critique, I wouldnt even read this thread lol

[ChalklYne]

[DarthStiv]

Er, you should fix the link a bit, but the head looks absolutely superb with the textures now,
it's a true starkiller finally!
You man did a great progress on it since the beginning, I simply have no words.

[ChalklYne]

getting closer, ill admit that. going to work on his neck and hair a bit more

@@Circa can you fix that link for me?


heres the sculpt so far... rough draft

[Scorpion]

His eyebrows are...funky and thick. Nice work none the less!

[therfiles]

Fixed those links. Looking great! Definitly a step in the right direction!

[Futuza]

Is it just me or does this one look like Adam Sandler?

[ChalklYne]

I think thats u brotha... although, I did make a SK one day that looked exactly like james franco oO wish I would have saved it...

[Lamented]

Wow. Love the texturing, man. The face is a little too narrow. Too pushed in from the sides. And I don't know if it's just me who feels this way, but I don't think his nose curves like that. Should be somewhat tougher. The lips are getting there and the forehead should be mostly right. Be wary of his eye sockets, also. They might be a little smaller but I don't know. Maybe not.

 

You're getting there, Chalk. Closer and closer.

[Milamber]

he looks kinda malnourished. And kinda more like anakin than starkiller. At least in the last picture Only my own opinion ofc.

Ears are still bothering me though, they look like discs attached to the head.