ChalklYne Posted November 17, 2012 Posted November 17, 2012 still a lot to be done but heres one of the characters i been working on. Vartex, Jango40, Delta_135 and 3 others like this
AshuraDX Posted November 17, 2012 Posted November 17, 2012 omg , kill it with fire before it lays eggs !those proportions are terrible , and the shape is off aswellespecially the head looks terribly wrong mate Cloud Senatu, Spirit, Lizfizz and 2 others like this
Milamber Posted November 17, 2012 Posted November 17, 2012 Quite harsh Ashura But yeah, what you pointed out was good feedback.
therfiles Posted November 17, 2012 Posted November 17, 2012 I kinda like it. Its one of the best Starkillers I have seen. I like the unique approach with the face. But yeah, a little work to be done with proportions. And he needs some more 'meat' on his bones!
spior Posted November 17, 2012 Posted November 17, 2012 He just needs to hit the gym a bit.And possibly a face transplant
MagSul Posted November 17, 2012 Posted November 17, 2012 I'll have to agree where proportions are concerned. I think this could turn out to be something excellent with a little more work, keep it up!
Delta_135 Posted November 17, 2012 Posted November 17, 2012 i think a face transplant might be an understatement...but good work anyway definitely made my day
ChalklYne Posted November 17, 2012 Author Posted November 17, 2012 yeah im hand painting the face bit by bit so its hell. but it is coming out good and the skinniness of him was only recently modified to look that way cuz when i overlayed him onto a real pic of starkiller hes a skinny lil dude. but ill still work at it like i said. none of his body textures are final at all. and ashura, may the fleas of a thousand camels infest yer bawls. lol hes gunna come out looking real nice judging by the progress so far. thx guys for the insight, luckily, its all the same things i saw last night before i crashed out, the face needs to be finished, and his proportions are a bit screwy, but besides that hes comin right along. an as for the head being "terribly wrong" id have to disagree man. for hand painting it its coming right along... heres some more painting excuse the lack of smoothing groups zbrush is kinda screwy with me. if i subdivide it smoothly, then it kinda jacks up my uvs and painting him is pointless, but im sure youll get the jist
AshuraDX Posted November 17, 2012 Posted November 17, 2012 dude...his face is flatto flat , apearently he dashed in a wall
ChalklYne Posted November 17, 2012 Author Posted November 17, 2012 damn u ashura. his face IS flat.. hold on ill mess with it.
AshuraDX Posted November 17, 2012 Posted November 17, 2012 yes but not THAT flat his mouth is completely flat
Malkav Posted November 18, 2012 Posted November 18, 2012 This face will haunt me for many nights. Lizfizz and Jango40 like this
KDR_3XILE Posted November 18, 2012 Posted November 18, 2012 I'm not sure why but when I first looked at the face, I saw George Bush.... Keep the work up, Star killer has never really been done well... Delmi likes this
Milamber Posted November 18, 2012 Posted November 18, 2012 Keep the work up, Star killer has never really been done well... Shiftee did a good job on one of the starkiller outfits spior likes this
KDR_3XILE Posted November 18, 2012 Posted November 18, 2012 Holy shit, that is a great effort...But it's the Sithstalker...Not StarKiller lol, I was hoping for a really good model of him in something like the Jedi Ceremonial robes or one of his outfits...
minilogoguy18 Posted November 18, 2012 Posted November 18, 2012 Scrap that head and make a new one, looks nothing like him.
bednarro Posted November 18, 2012 Posted November 18, 2012 Only face is not looking good, the others is good :-)
Circa Posted November 19, 2012 Posted November 19, 2012 I kinda like it. Its one of the best Starkillers I have seen. I like the unique approach with the face. But yeah, a little work to be done with proportions. And he needs some more 'meat' on his bones!That's the best you've seen? Have you seen RogueAgent's reskin of Toshi's Luke? http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/146/shot0001nx4.jpg/
Inyri Posted November 19, 2012 Posted November 19, 2012 That doesn't really look anything like Starkiller either, to be honest.
minilogoguy18 Posted November 19, 2012 Posted November 19, 2012 That doesn't really look anything like Starkiller either, to be honest. Totally agree.
Tempust85 Posted November 19, 2012 Posted November 19, 2012 To be honest it's not a quality model however, it is a good attempt. Over the years, I've seen others do ALOT worse including myself at one point. I say this to you, work on the profile of the head and add some ambient occlusion to the body textures.
ChalklYne Posted November 19, 2012 Author Posted November 19, 2012 yeah like i said not a single one of the body textures are even close to done, most of them arent even set up for it, just stand ins so i could see where i was going with it, and to add a little depth in the preview pics for u guys. as for the head, ill work on it bit by bit. im finishing up the menu system first to give myself some variety i hate just grinding it out on one thing for too long, i like coming back to it. thx for the crits, but mainly the one from dt about the profile needing touching up, the rest seemed kinda harsh, but im not really here to make friends anyways lol. ill touch em up when im ready, gunna start on the actual artwork wor the menu system and a few more animations til then
Circa Posted November 19, 2012 Posted November 19, 2012 That doesn't really look anything like Starkiller either, to be honest.Maybe not the face but the rest of it is awesome. There was the hood and cape version too. Since you don't usually see the model's face in multiplayer, I thought it was extremely good.
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