I would remove the TOR logo, and move the Darth Revan text to where it was, add a red or purple (hologram type?) light shining on Revan, perhaps move revan up a bit and have some sort of vague figure in the hologram looking at him. For the SW logo, I would add some sort of faint grungy rock texture over it, and a sharp thin black border around it, rather than the pale red. The Darth Revan text I would also add some sort of horizontal gradient over. And for the main background, I'd add some sort of faint hanger bay/workshop/any room with pieces of equipment and stuff lying about.