ChalklYne Posted November 24, 2012 Author Posted November 24, 2012 he was a bit saturated later dudes.. and inyri lol McGroose and spior like this
AshuraDX Posted November 24, 2012 Posted November 24, 2012 his skin looks so..... unhealthytakeo ut some of that yellow
Inyri Posted November 24, 2012 Posted November 24, 2012 Make your model's face look like this. I put them next to each other so you can see how much they don't look similar at all. McGroose likes this
Astral Serpent Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 I thought starkiller was ugly normally but.. but...No comment.
ChalklYne Posted November 25, 2012 Author Posted November 25, 2012 that was a comment loland yeah,it was a poor rushed attempt.we all agreed on this finally had a minute to work.started fresh and tried box modelling instead of edge modelling it. if that makes any sense. ill come back n post more after i get done rewriting these menus. prolly a week or so cuz i have to make a buncha roq's from scratch and animate the menu system in xsi. doing something completely different than anything ive seen on jka for the menus.morelike black ops or metro2033 main menu,but inside the rogue shadow.
minilogoguy18 Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 Well it looks more like a human and less like a cartoon character but still doesn't look like the person Inyri posted, facial features aren't there.
Malkav Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 Well the jawline and generally the lower part of the face are definitely going in the right direction.
therfiles Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 I think it is definitely an improvement. Good work so far! Can't wait to see these menus, they looked really cool in that video.
ChalklYne Posted November 25, 2012 Author Posted November 25, 2012 yeah i didnt wanna make sam.or these guys but morelike the tfu 1 starkiller imo they all look different,and im satisfied with my results.thx tho therfiles likes this
minilogoguy18 Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 You do realize your post doesn't really make any sense considering that Galen Merek (Starkiller) is modeled totally after Sam Witwer? To say that you modeled it after TFU 1 and not Sam Witwer is like a total contradiction. If it doesn't look like Witwer then it doesn't look like Starkiller from TFU 1, 2 or any game that ever may follow.
therfiles Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 I think that the author has the final say in this. He gets to choose what his starting point is. I think the model looks much better compared with this picture:And since this was his starting point, I think he is in the right direction. If he chooses to bases it off the above picture, thats fine. If he chooses to base it off Sam's picture, which isn't exactly the same, that's fine. I think it looks good except the skin is a little saturated, and there is no hair, but it is WIP. And the clothes have vastly improved. Good work!
ChalklYne Posted November 25, 2012 Author Posted November 25, 2012 they just dont look alike to me,but regardless, im done with most of the modelling process of this model. sincerest apologies to the disappointed lol thx r. i do appreciate allthe crits tho guys regardless of how harsh.hed be looking pretty blocky n not very proportionate if it werent for u guysthx again therfiles likes this
ChalklYne Posted November 25, 2012 Author Posted November 25, 2012 messin with texturing a bit not too happy with it so ill prolly pop it in zbrush and see what i come up with
Inyri Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 At least fix his ears. Whatever those things are on the sides of his head, they're not ears. Tempust85 likes this
ChalklYne Posted November 25, 2012 Author Posted November 25, 2012 yeah i was planning on painting emin zbrush,thats my shoddy photoshop work so far.thx 4 the reminder tho
minilogoguy18 Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 I think shes talking about texture and 3d shape.
ChalklYne Posted November 25, 2012 Author Posted November 25, 2012 earfix (3d wise) dont rilly want any more detail in the ears but good eye his ears are correctly lined up with his eyebrow and bottom of nose,but the view is kinda from below a bit in this i just noticed
Tempust85 Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 Is he wearing makeup? The overall look of the head reminds me of a romulan minus the ears.
ChalklYne Posted November 25, 2012 Author Posted November 25, 2012 yes.hes wearin makeup.lol just cleaning up the model a bit before i do a nice uv map for iti screwed his right forearm a minute ago,ill touch it up
therfiles Posted November 25, 2012 Posted November 25, 2012 Wow...that's much better! Good work! The marks on the face seem a little too pink to me...the lips, the scar, and the color around the eyes. Otherwise, lookin' great!
Barricade24 Posted November 26, 2012 Posted November 26, 2012 It's getting better but the face still needs a little work. The side of the head looks about right. But his face still seems a little flat.
ChalklYne Posted November 26, 2012 Author Posted November 26, 2012 screwin with some more texturing still havent done his hands, feet, torso, or furlows therfiles likes this
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