starkiller

[ChalklYne]

 

 

he was a bit saturated

 

later dudes.. and inyri lol

[AshuraDX]

his skin looks so..... unhealthy

takeo ut some of that yellow

[Inyri]

Make your model's face look like this. I put them next to each other so you can see how much they don't look similar at all.

 

[Astral Serpent]

I thought starkiller was ugly normally but.. but...

No comment.

[ChalklYne]

that was a comment lol

and yeah,it was a poor rushed attempt.we all agreed on this

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

finally had a minute to work.started fresh and tried box modelling instead of edge modelling it. if that makes any sense. ill come back n post more after i get done rewriting these menus. prolly a week or so cuz i have to make a buncha roq's from scratch and animate the menu system in xsi. doing something completely different than anything ive seen on jka for the menus.morelike black ops or metro2033 main menu,but inside the rogue shadow.

[minilogoguy18]

Well it looks more like a human and less like a cartoon character but still doesn't look like the person Inyri posted, facial features aren't there.

[Malkav]

Well the jawline and generally the lower part of the face are definitely going in the right direction.

[therfiles]

I think it is definitely an improvement. Good work so far! Can't wait to see these menus, they looked really cool in that video.

[ChalklYne]

yeah i didnt wanna make sam.or these guys

 

but morelike the tfu 1 starkiller

 

 

 

imo they all look different,and im satisfied with my results.thx tho

[minilogoguy18]

You do realize your post doesn't really make any sense considering that Galen Merek (Starkiller) is modeled totally after Sam Witwer? To say that you modeled it after TFU 1 and not Sam Witwer is like a total contradiction.

 

If it doesn't look like Witwer then it doesn't look like Starkiller from TFU 1, 2 or any game that ever may follow.

[therfiles]

I think that the author has the final say in this. He gets to choose what his starting point is. I think the model looks much better compared with this picture:

And since this was his starting point, I think he is in the right direction. If he chooses to bases it off the above picture, thats fine. If he chooses to base it off Sam's picture, which isn't exactly the same, that's fine. I think it looks good except the skin is a little saturated, and there is no hair, but it is WIP. And the clothes have vastly improved. Good work!

[ChalklYne]

they just dont look alike to me,but regardless, im done with most of the modelling process of this model. sincerest apologies to the disappointed lol

 

thx r.

 

i do appreciate allthe crits tho guys regardless of how harsh.hed be looking pretty blocky n not very proportionate if it werent for u guys

thx again

[ChalklYne]

messin with texturing a bit

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not too happy with it so ill prolly pop it in zbrush and see what i come up with

[Inyri]

At least fix his ears. Whatever those things are on the sides of his head, they're not ears.

[ChalklYne]

yeah i was planning on painting emin zbrush,thats my shoddy photoshop work so far.thx 4 the reminder tho

[minilogoguy18]

I think shes talking about texture and 3d shape.

[ChalklYne]

fixed his saturation problem

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[ChalklYne]

earfix (3d wise) dont rilly want any more detail in the ears but good eye

 

 

his ears are correctly lined up with his eyebrow and bottom of nose,but the view is kinda from below a bit in this i just noticed

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[DT.]

Is he wearing makeup?

 

The overall look of the head reminds me of a romulan minus the ears.

[ChalklYne]

yes.hes wearin makeup.lol

 

 

just cleaning up the model a bit before i do a nice uv map for it

i screwed his right forearm a minute ago,ill touch it up

[therfiles]

Wow...that's much better! Good work! The marks on the face seem a little too pink to me...the lips, the scar, and the color around the eyes. Otherwise, lookin' great!

[ChalklYne]

[ChalklYne]

 

 

 

 

[Barricade24]

It's getting better but the face still needs a little work. The side of the head looks about right. But his face still seems a little flat.

[ChalklYne]

screwin with some more texturing

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

still havent done his hands, feet, torso, or furlows