Circa Posted November 28, 2013 Posted November 28, 2013 That's extremely disturbing... Anyway, the nose looks a little too big (wide) now that I take a second look. Lamented and ChalklYne like this
MoonDog Posted November 28, 2013 Posted November 28, 2013 Why does the wound on his arm looked like a stretched texture of someone on their period? I'm sorry, but... x.x No offense, just please edit that in the future. XD You should listen to this guy Chalk. You can learn so much about skinning a model from him. Circa, Omicron, Kualan and 1 other like this
ChalklYne Posted November 28, 2013 Author Posted November 28, 2013 No offense, just please edit that in the future. XD Roger roger.
Circa Posted November 29, 2013 Posted November 29, 2013 Will someone come clean muh thread before he gets angry? @@therfiles @@Circa? thank you =)Somewhat cleaned. For the second time. Keep it together guys. ChalklYne likes this
Lamented Posted November 29, 2013 Posted November 29, 2013 Somewhat cleaned. For the second time. Keep it together guys. You're no fun.At all.
minilogoguy18 Posted November 30, 2013 Posted November 30, 2013 You're posting black backgrounds again... Psyk0Sith likes this
ChalklYne Posted November 30, 2013 Author Posted November 30, 2013 You're posting black backgrounds again...Roger that. Next ones will be more neutral
Scorpion Posted November 30, 2013 Posted November 30, 2013 Maybe it looks funky because he has no facial expression, so it looks like he's staring into your soul.
ChalklYne Posted November 30, 2013 Author Posted November 30, 2013 Nah it wouldnt be facial expession as much as it would be possibly the eyeball texture or shape of the eyes themselves.
Tempust85 Posted December 1, 2013 Posted December 1, 2013 Looks as though the jaw could be in a slightly more relaxed state (just a smidge though). The eyes are the standout thing that's killing it atm, they look too wide open like he's just seen what Mr Slave did to Paris Hilton on Southpark. ChalklYne likes this
Onysfx Posted December 1, 2013 Posted December 1, 2013 @@ChalklYne Your model is looking great! But... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvnwLLXHabg#t=0m58s Lamented and Link like this
ChalklYne Posted December 1, 2013 Author Posted December 1, 2013 @@ChalklYne Your model is looking great! But... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BvnwLLXHabg#t=0m58sROFL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! good times Onysfx likes this
Psyk0Sith Posted December 1, 2013 Posted December 1, 2013 yet that damn head still looks funky even after 25+ attempts. I mean...why heads giving you trouble? Still keep up the good work.Because the human head is a complex subject to represent, achieving likeness is even more of a challenge, i'm pretty sure there's very few people able to do that on jkhub, it takes time and lots of daily practice.
ChalklYne Posted December 7, 2013 Author Posted December 7, 2013 So uhhh.. you guys are probably going to kill me.. but.. I started Starkiller over again XD But all for very important reasons. So.. here is the new base topo, and a beginning of me starting to sculpt in zbrush.. I got a bit better topo going on here, in almost half of the verts that the ladt one was in, and it can be sculpted and easily brought back down to a game friendly resolution. I can also use the high res sculpt in XSI to render a really nice shadow map for him so trust me this restart was as necessary as the last hundred XD Plus, before I started really shaping it perfectly to his face, i saved a copy of just the decent topography and will be shaping it to be kotas militia members. Kreed Antilles Ordo likes this
Futuza Posted December 7, 2013 Posted December 7, 2013 Don't really hate you, I'm actually happy. Restarting at this point is probably a good idea since you now know what to avoid and what will work. Kreed Antilles Ordo and ChalklYne like this
ChalklYne Posted December 7, 2013 Author Posted December 7, 2013 Doesn't the topo seem to be flowing a bit better? So this is all in a day's work so far. sculpt came out pretty decent i think i can get some good shadows off of it and apply it to this texture Kualan and Lamented like this
AshuraDX Posted December 7, 2013 Posted December 7, 2013 nose is at a wrong angle , lips are protruded way to far (that duckface is far too strong )ears should be a little lower and bigger I think I really like the textures though , are they photosourced and retouche din Zbrush or completely handpainted ?
ChalklYne Posted December 7, 2013 Author Posted December 7, 2013 photosourced and retouched in Zbrush had to get the right alignment for his lips and stuff and then pained the correct colors in. its better that way so i stay in the lines lol. and i like to kinda handpaint it too so u get these nice crisp textures like here ill zoom in a bit and u can see what i mean.. so its not as blurry photosource and its not haint painted cartoony. i cant paint for shit handpaint without some sort of base.. look what happened to kazdan lol Lamented likes this
Lamented Posted December 8, 2013 Posted December 8, 2013 Very nice, but it looks like he has a Dooku/Mace-cross nose, and I agree with Ashura.
ChalklYne Posted December 8, 2013 Author Posted December 8, 2013 I will revisit his nose next time I open it up, thank you. This is the low poly model with textured decal on. so exactly what u would see in modview Kualan likes this
ChalklYne Posted December 8, 2013 Author Posted December 8, 2013 Oh dear.No offense intended, but... Before we even start, let me go ahead and tell you how crucial your opinion is... That being said, what you got for me? 990 verts
Kualan Posted December 8, 2013 Posted December 8, 2013 For someone with a tendency to react very badly to constructive criticism of their own work, you're offering some very non-constructive and unhelpful comments Deviance. @@ChalklYne , your work continues to improve, and it's encouraging to see you're not afraid to say "You know what? Let's start over." in order to get the best results you can. Modelling a human character - and one with a very iconic, prolific look that everyone knows - is probably one of the hardest challenges a modder can take on. Jeff, Circa, ChalklYne and 1 other like this
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