Well, I'm not sure how much editing was done, but some of the cues were well done. Nice job. If people are interested in my critique though, yes, too loud in most places. I recommend creating some automation of the volume, setting it quiter during the dialogue, and building a bit during the emotional death part. Music is there to feed emotion and if it's at its peak volume the whole time, there's nowhere to transition to when the emotion is at its highest. With that said, I think the original score for this part was perfect. It gave an eerie and mysterious feeling to the scene, because you're about to see what Vader looks like under the mask! And still provided a sad theme during the death as well. Although I realize that's not really the topic. But yeah, good start. I'd be interested in hearing it again with my tips implemented.