Circa Posted September 11, 2013 Share Posted September 11, 2013 Better! Not sure what to criticize exactly though. Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted September 11, 2013 Author Share Posted September 11, 2013 i was just seeing if anybody else was feeling the direction its going in before I continued. heres the low poly mesh without the smoothing Link to comment
Circa Posted September 11, 2013 Share Posted September 11, 2013 His head looks a little too tall. His ears look very...off. Not sure. Just the shape of them I guess. His nostrils look like they're flared. ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
Futuza Posted September 11, 2013 Share Posted September 11, 2013 Seems a bit closer that what you've done before, hard to tell without hair though. Not sure I"m going to be useful for offering feedback at this point. By the way if you end up making a lot of horrible heads, I wouldn't mind a pack of "Ugly Random Citizens by Chalke" showing up on the download sections. Just cause an attempt doesn't look like Starkiller doesn't mean its completely useless. Lamented, Circa, ChalklYne and 2 others like this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted September 11, 2013 Author Share Posted September 11, 2013 sounds amazing lol Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted October 2, 2013 Author Share Posted October 2, 2013 Circa and katanamaru like this Link to comment
katanamaru Posted October 2, 2013 Share Posted October 2, 2013 I'm liking it. ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
Stoiss Posted October 2, 2013 Share Posted October 2, 2013 this is the best far head you have done so far ChalklYne ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
Circa Posted October 2, 2013 Share Posted October 2, 2013 Definitely the best. Great work. There's some parts that still look weird, but I think that's just because it's not textured. If you texture it I think it will look great! ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
Botdra Posted October 2, 2013 Share Posted October 2, 2013 The lower half of his face looks like it's smaller scale than the rest of his head? Could be just the angles/lack of hairline that make it seem that way. ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted October 3, 2013 Author Share Posted October 3, 2013 I agree that the upper half has a bit of a lightbulb shape to it i will mess with it in a minute good eye Link to comment
Futuza Posted October 3, 2013 Share Posted October 3, 2013 You're definitely getting better mate, looking great so far! Will you release the indian version of Starkiller to that region? Botdra, Lamented, Omicron and 2 others like this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted October 3, 2013 Author Share Posted October 3, 2013 No smoothing here, that's the actual geometry And as promised... Futuza, Omicron, ent and 1 other like this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted October 3, 2013 Author Share Posted October 3, 2013 Now to work on his body 4100 vertsjust under 6000 tris I have about a week's worth of music to do for someone, then I will be finishing up the TIE facility and moving onto either Raxus Prime, or the cutscene chamber Stoiss and katanamaru like this Link to comment
katanamaru Posted October 3, 2013 Share Posted October 3, 2013 Yep I think that is hella progress. Great job. ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
Milamber Posted October 3, 2013 Share Posted October 3, 2013 Not gonna be super picky, but I got 2 tweaks to suggest still. 1. the eyes are kinda big still 2. Please look up an ear tutorial or something, because a persistent problem with ALL your heads has been messed up ears. They've improved but you're not quite there yet. It's one of the most noticeable features from the side. (remember people notice/are bothered by what's wrong a lot faster than what's correct, so the ear really stands out from the side now) even something like this is fine, your main issues right now are blurry ear textures, and a huge earlobe. ChalklYne likes this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted October 3, 2013 Author Share Posted October 3, 2013 Thank you! I agree that the eyes are too big. Im thinking too wide. I have a very very low poly/ low res version of the ears going on, and was hoping to sneak it by you guys rofl!! But good eye and good point that will be next is making sure he can hear. thanx dude Link to comment
Botdra Posted October 3, 2013 Share Posted October 3, 2013 I still have nightmares about that second one. Link to comment
Futuza Posted October 3, 2013 Share Posted October 3, 2013 I think that Evolution pack will be my new favorite skin pack of all time. Omicron and Tempust85 like this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted October 4, 2013 Author Share Posted October 4, 2013 hopefully better showing a close up of the texture katanamaru, Omicron and Barricade24 like this Link to comment
Futuza Posted October 4, 2013 Share Posted October 4, 2013 Something off when seen directly head on, but he looks damn good from the side. ChalklYne and therfiles like this Link to comment
ChalklYne Posted October 4, 2013 Author Share Posted October 4, 2013 im thinking it could be the area under his eyes top lip isnt wide enough heres a kinda cool pic of me painting it in zbrush Stoiss and katanamaru like this Link to comment
Circa Posted October 4, 2013 Share Posted October 4, 2013 The area between the eyes looks like it's too far out, making his eyes seem sunken in. Crappy picture, but hopefully you get my point. Link to comment
katanamaru Posted October 4, 2013 Share Posted October 4, 2013 I'm still liking it. Sorry I can't give any crits, but if it was uplaoded today I would recognize it was Sam, and I haven't even played TFU 1 or 2 besides the demo. Link to comment
Tempust85 Posted October 4, 2013 Share Posted October 4, 2013 This should be your primary reference to nail down the shape: The lighting used hits just about everything you need to look at. NumberWan and Omicron like this Link to comment
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