Clone trooper Phase 2 armor

[Barricade24]

Feedback shot 1:

 

 

The bottom of the kneepads don't seem to be round and have more sharp angles.

 

The Y in the legs could also be a bit wider.

[Circa]

Each of Barricade's critiques have me like:
 

 

But in a good way. Bottom line, he's the resident clone expert by far.

[DT.]

I have to hand it to Ashura. There's no way I could make all these highpoly changes. Once I go highpoly, I rarely change a thing unless it's Zbrush of course.

[AshuraDX]

I have to hand it to Ashura. There's no way I could make all these highpoly changes. Once I go highpoly, I rarely change a thing unless it's Zbrush of course.

I think you just need more practice

most of these last changes required very little to no work

and I use the Graphite freeform tools in max a lot, try them

[Archangel35757]

the toe end of shoes look too tall compared to reference.

[AshuraDX]

the toe end of shoes look too tall compared to reference.

yeah, noticed that aswell

 

since I oculdn't get a good angle that clearly showed the seams and detailing on the shoes from "official" sources

I had to base mine at a few pics of cloneboots someone makes (he even sells them)

http://www.thedentedhelmet.com/f45/leather-clone-shoes-my-own-pair-progress-36985-post519155/#post519155

[AshuraDX]

new update:

 

@@Barricade24 @@JAWSFreelao

 

not happy with the shoulder pads yet, atleast their backside the front looks fine to me

[Barricade24]

As far as the arms go, as you have already mentioned about changing the shoulder pads, the only change I see the needs to be made is that the circle on the back should end about halfway.

 

 

Now as far as some other parts of the body go, the fourth pack really should be a simple box.

 

I also think the the kneepads should have some rounder edges as shown and may be even a bit more narrow as shown:

[JAWSFreelao]

I love this. @@AshuraDX.

[AshuraDX]

I owe you this before I disappear from tomorrow on while Dark Souls 3 has me in its Grip...

 

@@Barricade24 @@JAWSFreelao @@Circa

[Jolly]

@@AshuraDX Maybe I will invade you sometime soon waiting for the game to come out in a hour is so painful haha

[AshuraDX]

@@AshuraDX Maybe I will invade you sometime soon waiting for the game to come out in a hour is so painful haha

I have to wait longer since I ordered a collectors edition from amazon

[Jolly]

@@AshuraDX Guess I get a headstart 

[Barricade24]

Additional foot reference in case it helps:

 

 

I'll come back with any additional feedback later.

[Circa]

I owe you this before I disappear from tomorrow on while Dark Souls 3 has me in its Grip...

 

@@Barricade24 @@JAWSFreelao @@Circa

 

[JAWSFreelao]

This makes me moist. @@AshuraDX

[AshuraDX]

since it seems that my parcel is coming later than expected I still have some time to kill, here's what I did in the past 3 hours

[GMRobinHood]

since it seems that my parcel is coming later than expected I still have some time to kill, here's what I did in the past 3 hours

Hope your parcel never arrives  

[Barricade24]

Okay, there are only like three changes that I see as necessary.

 

The main one is the elbow guards:

 

According to reference, they should be a bit more rounder, they could also be a bit shorter too.

 

The second thing is that you could bring down the neck seal a little more.

 

And finally, maybe just make the bottom edges of the shoulder pad a tad bit rounder.

 

Aside from those few things, I have nothing more to add.

[AshuraDX]

@@Barricade24, keep in mind that the clone o nthat pic doesN't have his arm straight, but bent to about 90° this also angles the pad and makes it appear smaller from that point of view. but you may be right about the curvature of the bottom

 

I hoped to be done with the helmet but I guess i'll commit that change later, shoulder pads are noted.

 

keep gathering crits everyone, Dark Souls 3 will keep me busy some more

 

[Langerd]

@@Barricade24, keep in mind that the clone o nthat pic doesN't have his arm straight, but bent to about 90° this also angles the pad and makes it appear smaller from that point of view. but you may be right about the curvature of the bottom

 

I hoped to be done with the helmet but I guess i'll commit that change later, shoulder pads are noted.

 

keep gathering crits everyone, Dark Souls 3 will keep me busy some more

 

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My brother is busy like You .. all the time X)

[extreme_x0]

<---Fan of your work.  Very well done so far.

[AshuraDX]

progress has been made!

 

each color represents a different UV set

arms & legs share the same layout, but can be mapped to different versions of the maps

[AshuraDX]

baked!

[AshuraDX]

blocking out basic colors for the ID map and bump detail