Nice work on this new Kyle Katarn model. I know that you're not nearly done, so I'm going to take a moment to suggest you try to give him a more real mercenary look. For a start, make his shirt more loose, perhaps with one of the neck flaps folded showing more of his inner t-shirt. Then try to to give him cargo pants. Not loose, skater type, cargo pants, but like military/tactical cargo pants. And the boots, those jedi like, slick leather boots don't suit the mercenary type. Go for something more bulkier, tall boots, but not horse riding like boots. Something like a pair of Iowa or Magnum military boots with some cool gaiters on top with some velcro straps or with those quick disengaging plastic buckles. And like someone mentioned, don't be afraid to go for a weary look. It will add to the feeling that he's an actual mercenary and not cosplaying. Better to suggest now than when you think you're almost done and it's too late to make big changes.