Obi-Wan Kenobi Ep1 1.6

Hello darkness my old friend.

Content Quality Committee, anyone? Pls..?

Content Quality Committee, anyone? Pls..?

Shouldn't criticize things, you'll get in trouble. lol

I swear you must be trolling.

I say this with all due respect, as I would probably produce worse XD

Blackwyrm

There were many pointed out that the facial expression of the first version was a smile and streched face. So, I changed a face to a grim look at this version. However, I understand that I need more improvement. I don't intend to be trolling.

The first version was better, this seems like a slight downgrade, and the robes seems to look worse too. Why don't you try using haplash's robes and improve the face texture? I think that you could get something cool out of it.

Keep it up!

Thank you for the advice,  I'll try my best.

love the robe but this face....ugh

So, I changed a face to a grim look at this version.

yeah, he actually looks kinda confused in some of the screens

So this was modelled after Qui-Gon was sliced? Explains why he be looking pissed.

I love this model man! good job!

This is a good start, though I think it could use a little more work. The model's face is a bit off in some areas - especially around the nose, and the skin itself suffers from a problem most "hyper-realistic" re-skins have: Uncanny Valley Syndrome. The robes and belt are also a bit plain, but nothing a quick touch up and a few shaders couldn't fix. That said - the body is really well proportioned/balanced, and overall well done - plus the boots are spot-on too! The hair looks great too, and is actually almost perfect - something I feel a lot of other Episode 1 Obi-Wan Kenobi models and skins struggle with for some reason. It's actually rather impressive you captured it so well! The use of a more serious facial expression makes him seem more neutral than grumpy to me (which is appropriate - given that Ewan McGregor spent most of the movie either stoic, confused or scowling,) so I think it was actually a good choice that (apart from the issues mentioned before about the Uncanny Valley) paid off nicely.

To sum it up: I suggest you touch up the model's head a bit more, and tone down the realism in the face just a tad. Do a little more texture work on the robes and belt, and add some mild shaders to the boots, belt and skin textures for the hands and face.

For your effort, I'll give it a reasonable 6.5/10. Not at all terrible, but I think you can do even better if you continue to work at it! You have some serious potential, and I really do look forward to seeing more!

(Side note: I do hope you find this review helpful. I'm not trying to be harsh, or seem overly-critical or anything, and if it came across that way at any point I apologize. Just trying to offer an honest critique, with constructive criticism and feedback is all.)

I'm very appreciative of your detail review. It is very helpful for me. As for face, I will tone down the realism. Thank you,

i´ve got a question and i don´t know where to ask.

is there a way to fight with a playermodel (like stormtrooper) in the sp against other stormtroopers.

Because everytime i wanted to kill them they didn´t atack me and ddnt died

I´sorry to write this in this chat

If you create a topic on the forum, I think you will get a good answer.

Ok this latest version is quite good. 

I admit I didn't commented the previous one because I found it very bad my friend...

But in this one, the level has really increased !

i´ve got a question and i don´t know where to ask.

is there a way to fight with a playermodel (like stormtrooper) in the sp against other stormtroopers.

Because everytime i wanted to kill them they didn´t atack me and ddnt died

 

I´sorry to write this in this chat

playermodel stormtrooper

playerteam player

SP game is really underrated :/

Thank you very much. It's very encouraging.

What's with all the toxic comments?

I'm glad to see that you took the criticism like a champ and improved your skin. It's a great improvement over the first version. Though, it could be improved furthermore between the neck's skin and the torso's.

Thank you for bringing it to my attention.

that face is perfect, i told you that your Obi Wan have potential ,the hair looks a bit short to me but this is only my opinion, good work.

Actually, this reskin is pretty decent, especially the face texture. Sure, it's not perfect, but a good start at least.

I've seen many reskins over the years, and this one is definitely not the worst.

that face is perfect, i told you that your Obi Wan have potential ,the hair looks a bit short to me but this is only my opinion, good work.

Thank you very much. Your comment is a good encouragement for me! I love your enhanced Obi-Wan!