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Milamber

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  1. Armored female zabrak (based on a request) just gotta fix weighting on it, then I'm probably releasing it. It could use more work on the textures, but I'm really tired of it, rather just release it and come back to it later.

     

    Honestly wondering if people are even gonna be interested in it though xD It's kind of specific and not star wars related at all, but we'll see.

  2. I agree with DT, you've done the head over like 5 times (guessing) and you keep focus on it, yes your overall head modeling has improved a lot from the start (seriously it has). But you seem to fail at noticing the landmarks of the face and nailing those down. Seems like you tend to rush into having a head so you skimp on the details? Dunno how you work so can't really tell.

     

    But I'd think it's safe to say that after the 5 tries (?) you need a break, work on the body :) There's still strange stuff going on there.

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  3. don't make the eye sockets THAT dark, and add more shadow to the actual eyeball, the eyes are really popping out so much because you're keeping them so bright, so the contrast is making him look all googly eyed.

     

     

     

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    see? still looks like the white of the eye even though it's not even close to as white as yours :) I know yours is still a work in progress, but try to fix those things before you present it, because it distracts people from where you might need the feedback more than just a tiny shading issue.

     

    Also, I agree with Futuza, the skin color of the previous version is a lot better. The skin tone you have now is overall too dark and desaturated, the values aren't all that bad I'd say, except with the eye sockets :) (http://navate.deviantart.com/art/SKIN-a-tutorial-Part-1-144294636 someone linked you this before, it's good :o)

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  4. I'm guessing you were told to go apply to one of the clans hosted with clanname.jkhub.org domains, you've gone to the wrong link mate, go get the right one so you can apply to the clan you wanted to apply to :) This is a community.

  5. If zbrush is your strongest point, why not get it looking right there then do a retopology based on that using 3dcoat/topogun/whatever?

     

    But yeah if you're saying you're done that's fine xD And overall it seems you learned how to do heads a lot better since you started on it, it's not quite starkiller yet, but it's someone else quite alright. Gotta admit I still dislike those ears though.

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    Not to say it isn't true, and maybe to a bit of an extreme, but have you seen Sam Witwer? lol

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    unless he is making an expression, the man basically suffers from perma-duckface.

     

     

     

    Yes I know, but he DOES have a non-duckface look.

     

     

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    It's pretty much only about removing a little of the dent below the lips between the lips and the chin, and in general pulling the lips a little in. But not gonna pursue the matter any further :) Just adding my feedback to this project.

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