Kualan

I'm sure you can make a great video though, as, judging by your comic, you've already proved to have the ability to make a good narrative.

Man, it definitely pays to have a few hours away from the scene and then come back to it with fresh eyes. Your criticisms are so glaringly obvious I can't believe I managed to overlook them - particularly that clipping hand! I also remember being so focused on animating her hair that I must have neglected some more facial animation towards the end of that shot. Many thanks.

I'm sure you'll keep improving with time. I look forward for more animations!