Hey, everybody. So, me and DarthDementous--we're both extreme KotOR nerds--were talking and I brought up the idea of writing a new book based on Darth Revan, starting from his advance to save the Republic to his near-death on his flagship. I thought it would be a fun project and a good way to elaborate on what Darth Revan's associations were, what he believed in, what his philosophy was, and what legacies he left behind, and all that. I just decided to whip up a little WIP cover for the story and I was wondering if I could get your opinion on how to make it better.