My project and humor in it

[Wystan]

So, my project, Silex Prime Adrian's Paradox Episode 1 The Mystery Man is nearly complete. Soon it will be voiced. Yet, im not rushing to give the script to the voice actors as i wanted the protagonist to joke. The problem is that i dont have a good sense of humor. Can someone help me alter his lines to have humor in them?

[Lancelot]

@@Wystan

What style is your project? Is it a serious project with some humor (like Doctor Who) or is it pure comedy?

Either way, humor must be handled well. Timing is important, as well as the use of it. If you use too much jokes, it will become too silly,

especially if you have a rather serious tone in your story.

 

Can you send me a PM with a sample text of your script, where you want a joke to be placed? I can't promise good results, or quality stuff, but I could try to make something out of it.

[Bek]

Timing is important, as well as the use of it.

Jokes are funnier if they are unexpected, there's a bunch of psychology that goes into this. Only kids like predicable and repetitive jokes.

[Circa]

Is this a JKA mod you're making?

[Wystan]

Yeah

[Circa]

Topic moved to Modding Assistance forum.