Qui-Gon Jinn 1.5

You're getting there. Your improvements to your Obi-Wan are also a sign of your progress.

Looking at that face and hearing "If you are looking for ransom I can tell you I don't have money, but what I do have are a very particular set of skills. Skills I have acquired over a very long career. Skills that make me a nightmare for people like you." I'd honestly believe he was a nightmare.

Thank you for comments,  I'll try my best.

This is definitely a good effort, and your work is definitely showing improvement! There does appear to be a bit of an exposed seam on his neck, and the boots look a little off. The tunic also looks a little plain considering this is suppose to be a realism model. Now, normally playermodels trying to be "realistic" suffer from what I like to call "Uncanny Valley Syndrome" - meaning the character almost looks real, but your brain subconsciously picks up on the illusion - making it a bit off-putting. Here, however, it doesn't bother me that much. I can't put my finger on what it is, but you did manage to find a good balance - so well done!

Overall, you get a solid 8/10 from me! You continue to show talent and improvement with each release, and should be proud of your work!

I'm very appreciative of your detail review. That’s very helpful, I can learn a lot from you!