CrimsonStrife

I'm good at them, the trick is trying not to show influence from other IPs since there is just soo much out there.

What engine are you planning on doing this on?

Also, you perhaps need a bit more fleshing out to do I think.

Also, I noted that on your target audience, you're going for a teen/young adult kind of feel, yet you're going for a toony look in order to appeal to younger gamers. This seems rather backwards doesn't it? I mean, it does to me anyway. Most teenagers these days aren't really into toony games these days, they're into grit, or they're into..well, not toony stuff. You definitely should reconsider your target audience and/or your reasoning for going with a toon art style.