JAWSFreelao Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 This is like staring at next-gen NBA 2K15... Link to comment
Vulcan Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 I love the clothing, it's one of the best detailwork i've ever seen But a comment wouldn't be complete without constructive criticism!In comparison, the skin on the arms is pretty low res. What bothers me a bit is that the biceps kinda merges in the deltoid muscle, and the deltoid has a pretty hard edge.With his muscle structure, the deltoid muscle should be a bit longer on the arm, and the biceps should be a bit more bulky in the middle () <- something in the shape of that (if you work in Zbrush, the default claybuildup is a way to go)Then the next step could be to add some detail to the back of his elbow, and ofcourse some hairs. It looks a bit like he shaves his arms currently! Couldn't comment on the rest though, that looks devine Scerendo likes this Link to comment
leadarc Posted January 10, 2015 Share Posted January 10, 2015 This model, holy crap. If jka can handle it, it will be my main skin for jka. That thing is awsome, you got real talent dude! keep up the goood work! Link to comment
JAWSFreelao Posted January 10, 2015 Share Posted January 10, 2015 I agree, muscle mass might be one of the few additions I'd make. He looks like he has my arms, lol. Scerendo and Jeff like this Link to comment
Scerendo Posted January 10, 2015 Author Share Posted January 10, 2015 I love the clothing, it's one of the best detailwork i've ever seen But a comment wouldn't be complete without constructive criticism!In comparison, the skin on the arms is pretty low res. What bothers me a bit is that the biceps kinda merges in the deltoid muscle, and the deltoid has a pretty hard edge.With his muscle structure, the deltoid muscle should be a bit longer on the arm, and the biceps should be a bit more bulky in the middle () <- something in the shape of that (if you work in Zbrush, the default claybuildup is a way to go) Then the next step could be to add some detail to the back of his elbow, and ofcourse some hairs. It looks a bit like he shaves his arms currently! Couldn't comment on the rest though, that looks devine I know where you coming from, arms are bugging me too. Think I'm going to sculpt them first then retoplogise this time, rather than working up from a low poly base mesh. Thanks for the feedback, I'll see what I can get done this evening. I'm very excited to see what comes out of this! I think I must realise that how it looks now is probably not going to be like that in Jedi Academy though , looks way to out of that engine's league. Unless this is what rend2 leads to, in that case I welcome our new rendering overlords. Probably after I'm done with tweaking some of the model I'll quickly him in game, although rend2 supports these maps, it will depend alot on the game's lighting. Link to comment
Scerendo Posted January 14, 2015 Author Share Posted January 14, 2015 Finishing up his mercenary outfit: Lancelot, therfiles, Jeff and 4 others like this Link to comment
JAWSFreelao Posted January 15, 2015 Share Posted January 15, 2015 Man, TFU ain't got nothin' on this. Langerd likes this Link to comment
Langerd Posted January 15, 2015 Share Posted January 15, 2015 Man, TFU ain't got nothin' on this. Yep I Agree.... Scerendo - your model kick ass! Link to comment
DT. Posted January 15, 2015 Share Posted January 15, 2015 What's it look like without normal mapping? Link to comment
Psyk0Sith Posted January 15, 2015 Share Posted January 15, 2015 Man, TFU ain't got nothin' on this. Erh let's not get carried away here, TFU's art is far from being average. Jolly likes this Link to comment
Milamber Posted January 16, 2015 Share Posted January 16, 2015 Could I suggest looking up some wrinkle/folds tutorial of sorts? you have a lot of wrinkles/folds that don't really make sense to me. Scerendo likes this Link to comment
Scerendo Posted January 16, 2015 Author Share Posted January 16, 2015 I appreciate the constructive feedback guys, this project is a learning process for me, so anything helps. Could I suggest looking up some wrinkle/folds tutorial of sorts? you have a lot of wrinkles/folds that don't really make sense to me. Was looking at one just now, my house mate pointed out the same thing earlier today funnily enough. I'll tackle it over the weekend. What's it look like without normal mapping? I'll post some comparisons tomorrow Thanks again for any feedback guys. Langerd, therfiles and Jago like this Link to comment
Scerendo Posted January 20, 2015 Author Share Posted January 20, 2015 Just a small update. Was using dDo to help make some textures for the Jedi robes (normal maps on left and without on right): Still need to do a few things, I'll bake the normal maps into the diffuse as well, just didn't have much time this evening to do it. Jeff, Langerd, DarthStiv and 2 others like this Link to comment
Scerendo Posted January 27, 2015 Author Share Posted January 27, 2015 Still working on his textures, but made some work on his clone wars and darkside outfit: Circa, Lancelot, DarthStiv and 3 others like this Link to comment
Scerendo Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 Small update: Jedi Robes: hhunter6, DarthStiv, Circa and 1 other like this Link to comment
JAWSFreelao Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 My suggestion stands: More biceps. Quinlan may not be ripped but he is hella thick. Scerendo likes this Link to comment
DarthStiv Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 Reminds me of the Anakin's model by Toshi very much, even a Sidious from TFU a bit. That's great man, you rocs! Scerendo likes this Link to comment
AshuraDX Posted January 30, 2015 Share Posted January 30, 2015 now please finally replace those ugly default JKA hands Scerendo likes this Link to comment
Scerendo Posted January 30, 2015 Author Share Posted January 30, 2015 My suggestion stands: More biceps. Quinlan may not be ripped but he is hella thick. I'm working on his order 66 outfit, so don't worry, I'll definitely make him more muscular. Reminds me of the Anakin's model by Toshi very much, even a Sidious from TFU a bit. That's great man, you rocs! You're not wrong, I was a bit unsure of how to approach the robes, given JKA's rigid skeleton, so I was looking at jedi models in modview, toshi and hapslash included, which gave me some excellent reference. now please finally replace those ugly default JKA hands Haha definitely. JAWSFreelao and DarthStiv like this Link to comment
DT. Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 Did this guy ever appear in a movie? Can't remember. Link to comment
Circa Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 Did this guy ever appear in a movie? Can't remember.No, but he's a huge character in the EU books during the Clone Wars and he even is in an episode or two of the show. He's an interesting character. Link to comment
Bek Posted February 1, 2015 Share Posted February 1, 2015 Did this guy ever appear in a movie? Can't remember.Yeah he did actually, he had like a couple seconds of screentime in the Phantom Menace. GPChannel, Barricade24, Darth Reborn and 2 others like this Link to comment
Indy' Totof Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 Whoa.... Just whoa.... I cannot wait to see this model released here ! Link to comment
Scerendo Posted March 1, 2015 Author Share Posted March 1, 2015 Hey guys got caught up with alot of other work for university, so apologies for the slow process. Started working on his order 66 skin, not quite there but I think its coming along okay: i had a different mesh that had been burnt away, but somehow I messed up the normals on it, so I'll have to re-evaluate that one. Link to comment
AshuraDX Posted March 3, 2015 Share Posted March 3, 2015 you should revisit the anatmony in his backespecially his upper back and shoulders look offhttps://www.anatomy4sculptors.com/anatomy.php?menu=189&sub=191 Scerendo likes this Link to comment
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